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Bula vinaka Point England. My name is Taniela. I’m from
St Pius X Catholic School. I love your stepping moves
when you play rugby. I loved the way you played in the
finals. You really worked hard and it was impressive.
Keep up the good work.   

My comment is a quality comment because I think this is a good comment. I have greeted the school. My comment has  positive words, like impressive. I do have a very good greeting with in it as well as punctuation.

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Kia Ora Rm6. My name is Taniela and I come from St Pius X School.  I think your song fits very well with your movie. I loved your Fortnight skins and the regular clothes.  The dances were impressive, because there were so many different dances. I am really looking forward to seeing your next film.




My comment is a quality comment because it has details and it has many power words within it and it has impressive that is also a power word.

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Malo Rm7. My name is Taniela. I’m from St Pius X School. I
really  cracked up laughing when the ball hit your head.
It was really funny. The person who read about the dodgeball
was from the Time Machine and he was really funny.
Keep your great work up .

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comment yet. Because I have a good greeting and it was specific and
power words and it had punctuation in it.    

Jubilee Celebrations

At nine am. We all were changed in to our school clothes whe had to pack our food  after. We packed up we all got in the car when the engine started. Josaia, Maraia, And lewa were so

quiet i had to talk untill one of them spoke. When we got there w were getting the food out

Pita was the only boy there he said he was standing there for 2 hours i didn’t belive him . when we got to church there were lot’s Of people there. All of the boys and girls were apart the girls were on theleft and the boys were on the right when mass started we all sang after

we sang the gospel was from psalms chapter 24. Mrs Gaffeny and mrs Wiliam took the offertree  after church.

We had to go to our curturl group I was in the fijian group we all were eating panikeke and we All drank then we got dressed. And then we were in the hall danced.

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Te Oro And Matariki

In the morning we lined up to go to Te Oro. Us and Room Five walked down Line  Street. When we got to Te Oro we had  to take off our shoes.  We saw a Maori lady with a moko on her face.  She told us that the ladies had to go in first. The boys then followed them.  We all sat quietly on the mat. The Maori people sang a song to us. After they sang they divided us into groups.

They put me with Whaia Kelly’s group. We learned how to draw  a Koru and piko piko and niho and a hammerhead shark.

We all went to get rocks and we started to paint. I painted with gold glitter, red glitter, and  green glitter, and green and purple paints. I was trying to paint myself but instead I painted a pig.

We introduced ourselves to the whole group. Bella  had to explain what we did.

Then we walked back to school. By Taniela

Taniela baskeball nba star

At 12:am Rm3 went to to the court. After we got there we were late. when we got there we had to get basketball’s. When I got mine we had to team up with 2 players, me and Jabez were a team

Mr.Juhlala told one of the teammates to stand on the yellow line and the person that’s not on the yellow line has to take ten steps away. then mrs Jahlil took maola as his partner he told us what to do after.

He told us what to do, he told us the amount of numbers we have to go up to. We had to go up to 30 then we started going.  Jabez and I were up to 29 then we finish then we played golden child with the girls.

Our team didn’t have enough girls then coach juhala said “Who wants to go in the girls team?” Then Aisake and Savior were in the girls team. Then the other team were shooting and Amihuti was the golden child. The shooting team was was trying to get the running team out. The running team were trying to make it to the finish before the shooting team got the basketball in the hoop.

Cross Country

In the morning I went to room6. Claudia was setting us up to go. When we got the shelf Jabez and Opeti took me and Huti. Lau was in the car when  we got there we all went to the hall when we got to the hall. Mr. Slaid was there he was wearing boots he said the year threes had to go first when Mr. Slaid said on your mask get set go. I was coming third when we were runing  we were going the wrong way but the the officers. Came over and said your going the wrong way me and Lisate and 5 poeple went back was still going the right way. I got to the fininsh line and then i came 1.

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My chromebook is in the middle of my desk.

When I am walking with my chromebook my lid is closed.

My chromebook is in the COW when I am finished.

I need to stand up and push my chair in before I pick up my chromebook.

I pick my chromebook up with two hands.

I need to put my chromebook away when I am eating or drinking.

I will type gently on the keyboard

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Hug hold my chromebook.

My chromebook is in the middle of my desk.

When I am walking with my chromebook my lid is closed.

My chromebook is in the COW when I am finished.

I need to stand up and push my chair in before I pick up my chromebook.

I pick my chromebook up with two hands.

I need to put my chromebook away when I am eating or drinking.

I will type gently on the keyboard

close my chrome book gently with two hands

Close my chromebook gently with two hands

   

Report Writing on Turnips

REPORT WRITING

A report tell us about things. It tells us what a thing is, what it looks like,

where it is found and what it can do.

Title	My Purple Turnip
Classification (type/sort/kind)	Turnips are vegetables. They belong to the Brassica class.
	It is a root vegetable.
	It belongs to the mustard family.
Description (Describe it)	The turnip has a swollen root.
	Sometimes it can taste spicy.
	It is supposed to be soft but  sometimes it’s hard.
Location (Where is it found?)	It’s found in the ground and it’s  grown in warm countries, including England, Scotland.  and Ireland.
Dynamics (What does it do/what is it good for?)	It has calcium.
	It takes away fat.
	The turnip has vitamins K, A, C, E, B1, B2, B3, B4, B5, B6.

My self Taniela

Hello. My name is Taniela. I am from Saint Pius X School. I live in Auckland and I am 7 years old. I have one brother and  no sisters.  I am in Year 3 and I’m a Fijian boy.

I really enjoy playing soccer with my friends. My challenge is to achieve my maths goals in fractions. I am good at writing and spelling. 

I get help from Jabez  and my  soul friend’ Malachi. Jabez helps me connect with people and get my blog on. I still want to have fun with my friends and my family. 

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Hug hold my chromebook.

My chromebook is in the middle of my desk.

When I am walking with my chromebook my lid is closed.

My chromebook is in the COW when I am finished.

I need to stand up and push my chair in before I pick up my chromebook.

I pick my chromebook up with two hands.

I need to put my chromebook away when I am eating or drinking.

I will type gently on the keyboard

close my chrome book gently with two hands

Close my chromebook gently with two hands

My Letter To Mrs Bell

       Happy birthday Mrs Bell

Dear Mrs Bell

 I would like to tell you that your beautiful  and helpful and kind to me. You always bring our hot dogs and our letters. I really enjoy you coming to us with our prints and calling us. You have a lovely heart and you are always there for me when I'm hurt and angered. God bless you Mrs. Bell.

Love from Taniela.

My Mother Day Letter

Happy Mothers Day On mother's day. I went to drop of my dad at the airport with mum and brother my sisters stayed at home. with my grandma so we carried on so my dad told me that he would tell me his password.So he gave us a hint It was the first boat to land in Fiji so we said boats but Is was Kaunitoni 81. So we started having chat while me and Josaia was fighting. But Josaia was winning by his punching me with his long hand It could reach me. But I as choking him so when we got to the airport me and josaia was sleeping.  Then they woke us up then we helped my dad take his suit cases then we had lunch with him . After we ate we went home and ate  chocolate.

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