Comment three

Bula vinaka Point England. My name is Taniela. I’m from
St Pius X Catholic School. I love your stepping moves
when you play rugby. I loved the way you played in the
finals. You really worked hard and it was impressive.
Keep up the good work.   

My comment is a quality comment because I think this is a good comment. I have greeted the school. My comment has  positive words, like impressive. I do have a very good greeting with in it as well as punctuation.

Comment two

Kia Ora Rm6. My name is Taniela and I come from St Pius X School.  I think your song fits very well with your movie. I loved your Fortnight skins and the regular clothes.  The dances were impressive, because there were so many different dances. I am really looking forward to seeing your next film.




My comment is a quality comment because it has details and it has many power words within it and it has impressive that is also a power word.

Comment one

                                                         

https://pesgoodwin.blogspot.com/2018/11/dodgeball.html

Malo Rm7. My name is Taniela. I’m from St Pius X School. I
really  cracked up laughing when the ball hit your head.
It was really funny. The person who read about the dodgeball
was from the Time Machine and he was really funny.
Keep your great work up .

My comment is a quality commment becauyseI really think this is my greatest
comment yet. Because I have a good greeting and it was specific and
power words and it had punctuation in it.