The new school

 Our  new school St Pius X School
Our school is still geting re-built but I just wanna tell you what its gonna look like.
Its gonna have a two stories with an elevator and stairs.
The only clasrooms that can fit on there is Room Three, Room Five, and Room Seven.
I’m lucky because i’ll be able to see what the new school will look like, most of the seniors will have to leave and won’t be able to see it.

Our schools costs 7.5 million. We have to look after it and take care of it. I think we’re gonna have a pool with a big playground. I hope it has an escape room whenever fire comes.
It is also gonna have a parking area and a attic with old stuff in it.
We are going to move into our new school in Term 4.

Rm 3 Assembly

We projected our work onto the screen.

We announced for people to come to the front.

It was the second to last week of term one.

Everybody had a part except the people with the letter A.

We had to do our parts in our hearts.

We got ice cream.

And the people who did parts, got 2 or 3 scoops and the people who didn’t do a part got one,  By Taniela.

Room 3 PE time

My Holiday

             

In the morning I woke up at 6am. To go to Fiji for a family Re Union had to go with my brother, and mother, and father, as soon as I got in the car we were packing up our suitcase.

When we were finished packing the suitcase for now when left we were at the airport.
I said goodbye to them only my aunty and my uncle to when we checked in.
There were only 4 seats left and there were four  

of us but then we left a suitcase home so my aunty gave it back that was
lucky when we got on the plane because we almost missed it it was l minute left.

We were looking for number 29 and 28 and 27 and 30 for all of us to sit down
we were up in the air we saw the sea above us
after three hours we got off there we were getting our lugge.

 

When I went out side my dad and uncle were standing there
I went to hug my dad I didn’t no my uncles hes name was tioks
an we got in the car and left.

Comment three

Bula vinaka Point England. My name is Taniela. I’m from
St Pius X Catholic School. I love your stepping moves
when you play rugby. I loved the way you played in the
finals. You really worked hard and it was impressive.
Keep up the good work.   

My comment is a quality comment because I think this is a good comment. I have greeted the school. My comment has  positive words, like impressive. I do have a very good greeting with in it as well as punctuation.

Comment two

Kia Ora Rm6. My name is Taniela and I come from St Pius X School.  I think your song fits very well with your movie. I loved your Fortnight skins and the regular clothes.  The dances were impressive, because there were so many different dances. I am really looking forward to seeing your next film.




My comment is a quality comment because it has details and it has many power words within it and it has impressive that is also a power word.

Comment one

                                                         

https://pesgoodwin.blogspot.com/2018/11/dodgeball.html

Malo Rm7. My name is Taniela. I’m from St Pius X School. I
really  cracked up laughing when the ball hit your head.
It was really funny. The person who read about the dodgeball
was from the Time Machine and he was really funny.
Keep your great work up .

My comment is a quality commment becauyseI really think this is my greatest
comment yet. Because I have a good greeting and it was specific and
power words and it had punctuation in it.